Saturday, October 8, 2011

Asutosh's Realisation :Short Story


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Asutosh was the youngest amongst 3 children of a modestly religious family. Compared to his two brothers who were bright in school, our protagonist was just about an average boy.

Born into this unpretentious middle class family with some strangely rigid sense of values, Asutosh hardly ever received any special love or appreciation from the parents, as for them, this was just not a done thing. Any innate talent therefore had absolutely no chance of coming to the fore, as lubrication was never available. This however had no specific effect on Asutosh who was a simple happy-go-lucky kind of a boy.

To be fair however, he had a (a) good talent for music, (b) he was almost always extremely keen to help any and every one and with or without asking and (c) was more than average in sports, but as was to be expected, these were neither seriously noticed by the parents and because /in spite of the former, nor the other friend’s circle.

He was about ten, when he along with other friends of the locality was playing a game which was very popular in those days- Kabaddi, an old game where one’s capacity to hold breath and simultaneously outwit the opponents with physical maneuvers are both tested.

The game goes somewhat like this; there are two sides of say 5/6 members each. A court is drawn, with a middle line dividing the two. Players from each side take turns to cross this line, venture into the other territory, holding one’s breath by loudly chanting “kabadi kabaddi” and at the same time try and touch one of the opponents and return to base without getting captured by them. The one who is thus touched gets eliminated, and so is the fellow who is unable to reach back safely. The game goes on till one team loses all the players. There is also a special feature; a fellow who is sitting outside gets automatically re-instated when a player from the other side gets eliminated.

It so happened that after a few rounds Asutosh was the only player remaining in his side. His getting out would end the game. The senior players of his team hopelessly looked to Asutosh to produce a miracle, get at least one of the opponents “out” which would automatically re-instate of one of the team members, from where there could be a hope for a revival.

It was our hero’s turn to enter the opponent’s territory and come back neither getting caught nor losing his breath. For the other team, with victory in sight, letting the small boy Asutosh have a little satisfaction was a bit of a patronizing goodwill. The boy scampered home with a slight grin, though the reality hit home immediately thereafter. He now had to face the next test and save the day for his team.    

It was now the turn of the opponents; the captain himself got ready for the final kill; the crowd’s eyes however were on the little fellow. He had receded to the extreme limits of the court, to allow himself some meager chance to secure his opponent.

To cut the story short, out of pure luck, our boy just produced the miracle; he pounced on his opponent and pinned him down with almost no chance for an escape. The entire act was as perfect as it was unexpected. The teams including the opponents and even the Captain, who was caught, every one of them roared in a terrific applause.

For Asutosh this was an exhilarating moment; it was for the first time in his humdrum life that he experienced something like a recognition/ and accolades to top that. This moment however did not linger for long. It faded from memory within the next few days. Life was back to the usual routine; going to school without the home work getting done, having a thrill or two in not getting caught for some pranks which were unparalleled in terms of “bliss” etc. 

Around this time a small family of a husband/wife team with their only daughter moved to a house next to our hero’s. The daughter- Sangeetha- was about a couple of years elder to Asutosh. She was not great looking, but the family doted on her and felt that   she was the most beautiful girl in town. And quite contrary to the style of their new neighbors, the parents would notice every little effort of the girl and proudly hail her talents to any and every body.   

In sync with those times, Sangeetha was given music lessons at home; she was an average student but to her parents her music was divine. At the very first sight of this girl, Asutosh was smitten; he just liked everything about this girl who appeared so different. The girl however was a bit haughty, could not really care for this unpretentious young fellow, let alone like him. She felt herself and her family too refined for this rustic boy.

As with any new comer there were always little errands to complete, and Asutosh, who was an innately noble “do-good-to-others” kind of a boy, doing such work for the girl-who he liked- and her family was an indeed pleasant task. So much so that over time the parents even started liking the little boy to the annoyance of the girl.  

Asutosh was never seriously concerned about her feelings towards him; he was just happy to be able to help. This however did not prevent him being constantly amused by her limited grasp of music and the simultaneous “greatness chit” given by her parents, but these, he kept to himself.   

Time passed by and our hero entered college; this was a wonderful experience for him as there were neither the watchful eyes of his brothers nor the fear of reprimands from the father. There was therefore this mad urgency to live life to the full while it lasted.
This dream was partially broken when he heard about Sangeetha’s marriage; though there was nothing like nurturing of a thought of loving her, he was uncomfortable to hear about her becoming someone else’s wife. The parents added to the discomfiture – fully aware of his helpful nature- they gave him the huge responsibility of looking after the groom’s family during the course of the marriage; from receiving them to the time of bride’s leaving for her sasural.

Being a nice chap, all his inhibitions were given a go-by, and he gave this job his full hearted support and enthusiasm. Every whim of the groom’s party would find a solution from our hero so much so that he became a darling of the groom’s party- another pleasant experience- as winning such fulsome accolades, was a rare experience.

By the evening after the marriage there was a reception held by the groom’s party; once it started, our hero decided to take a nap as he was absolutely sure that everything that was to be done was done and feeling totally exhausted, he needed to rest. Sangeetha’s memory was beginning to fade, and at peace with himself he went into a deep slumber.  As the reception was coming to a close, there was this photo-op with all family/close friends’ circle. Asutosh was never really missed though from the groom’s side there were a few solicitous enquiries.

A few days later, Sangeetha had come to her “maika” and there was this rejoicing all over again. Asutosh was also there. When they were going thru the wedding album in that usual “fulsomely happy” mood, Sangeetha’s mother genuinely was surprised to find that our man Asutosh was not to be found in any of the frames. To almost every one’s shock and to Asutosh in particular, Sangeetha made the most obnoxious comment; that Asutosh had the uncanny habit of being away from the scene when he was wanted.   

Just for a moment our very cool protagonist was taken aback; he was unable to imagine that this girl, whom he had admired for so long, could be so uncouth and callous.  Never one to expect an accolade, this stinging comment however was just repulsive. Civilized as he was, he just let it pass and could only curse himself for having nursed such a blind love for one who could only be described as rotten. He made up his mind to be careful in the future about judging people.

Time passed, he graduated, took up a job, but somehow the recognition/accolades never really came his way; his boss would always cheat him by taking credit for what he had done, friends -if not deliberately- out of habit did not take him seriously ever. There was however a silver lining to this; without being conscious of it, since he could understand and emote with anyone who shared a similar fate; he was able to come up with spontaneous praise for anything which was slightly better than average, especially from those whom he knew. He could also spot innate talent and go overboard at times with ecstatic comments. There was also a flip side- any imagined slight, or sham behavior would rail him.

Once it so happened that the son of a very senior person of the company had to be given a birthday gift – a small parcel. The son was studying near the city where Asustosh was posted. The man spoke to him personally to get this arranged. Knowing this man’s warped sense of values, Asutosh was mulling over as to what to do, when an opportunity presented itself to his pleasant surprise immediately. A group company GM whose son was also there had instructions for his sales representative thru Asutosh that this Rep’s next tour will cover this place unofficially and Asutosh should not raise any queries with the bills.

Asutosh thought his job was over; he promptly handed over this parcel to the Rep, and quite forgot about this affair, after confirmation was received about safe delivery. However after a few days when the senior man was in town, Adsutosh was indirectly reprimanded for having used an office rep to do such personal errands!!!!! Asutosh for the first time in his life was just disgusted; with his senior for his hypocrisy, with that other GM who could use him so easily and yet be the closest to the former and both of these cited by others in the company and outside as examples of virtue/diligence et al, and finally the Providences apparent unfairness in denying any kind of comfort which in His dispensation just belonged to others and - worse- to especially those who probably did not qualify. 

He was in turmoil when someone suggested that he visit a local spiritual guru; Asutosh went to him without any great expectation. After hearing our hero’s woes the Guru told him thus: “Your wailing about His raw deal is no better than the successful one’s boast of his personal talent/endeavor. All your troubles can be traced to your desire for ownership; this is mine, this gives me pleasure etc. The moment you are able to get to the stage of “not mine” and in a true sense able to feel that it is all His will and try and give away to all who are in more need, you will start getting peace. The life we have been given is a sort of a play script written by Him, and the name of the game is to realize that we are all play-acting the role He has given us , the denial, the apparent injustice et al will become meaningless once you reach this stage. This is extremely difficult though but the only way to everlasting peace”.

Asutosh came back with mixed feelings; being used to help others he could see no problem with the first prescription, the second part “life is a drama” kind of wisdom was a bit over his head. But the Guru’s voice, the ambience of his ashram etc were soothing, and he could feel that stirring inside which seemed to suggest that there is something in what the holy man had said.

The next morning came two surprises; he read in the papers that Sangeetha has been awarded a Padma Bhushan for Music! In her interview she had talked about her diligent practice, her up-bringing and innate talent in music which could be brought to fore by her teacher etc!!

The other was a story from a friend in Facebook which went somewhat like this; a man is attending to a complaint about electricity failure in a block in the city and telling the caller that this will take a minimum3 / 4 days to get attended to. The caller repeatedly calls up saying that the place becomes too dark in the night causing huge amount of inconvenience to the people in the area.

The agency finally sends a man to the spot and who is able to identify the fault and rectify it. He then comes to a shop to make a phone call to the boss to tell him that the fault was minor and he has done the needful. He strikes a conversation with the shopkeeper, who hearing that the fault is repaired thanks this fellow profusely. The man tells him that but for that idiot who had phoned up repeatedly this job would not have been done; only to find out that it was the same shopkeeper who is that idiot. Then the punch line…

The shopkeeper refuses to take the call charge of a rupee but our man insists and drops a coin on the counter. The shopkeeper is unable to take it being totally blind. When the man asks him as to why he should take so much of pain for a street light problem, the blind man answers that being blind he could understand what darkness meant!!!! Touche’ .

The Holy man’s words starts to sink in ……. Asutosh renews his journey towards that final peace in “realization”.       
                                 
Hope folks you like it ...... Vichu

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